Three Successes

The three best successes of my paper:

-I think that my counter arguments are written in a way that is unbiased and I have the information to rebuttal these counter arguments effectively.

-I think that most of my information effectively supports my thesis, but there are some areas that could use some “full circle” remedies.

-I think that my “bee argument” is the most effective and prevalent problem. I think that if the reader were to take anything away from my paper, I would want it to be that conventional farming practices are killing our bees. Without our bees, we do not have food.

-There were only a couple of areas that I addressed the reader directly. Easy fixes!

- Clayton Peppler

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