Improvements of Mine:
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1. I made basic grammar/spelling edits.
2. I added a works cited page.
3. I changed the wording the make it more clear.
Improvements of Summers:
1. She added more information on growth hormones.
2. She added more clear distinction between "all-natural" and organic.
3. She fixed basic grammar and spelling mistakes.
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