1. I added lots of information on the growth hormones, pesticides, and food additives.
2. I added information on "All-Natural" vs organic food.
3. I fixed some grammar and spelling problems. I also rearranged some of my sentences so they made more sense.
**Note that I originally wrote a long conclusion, however my computer must of deleted it. I am in the process of re-writing my conclusion**
What Kristen Changed:
1. She added a works cited
2. She edited some grammar and spelling issues.
3. She changed some sentences so that her paper/ wording mad more sense.
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