Rubric Criteria

1.

I have been working more on my academic tone and making sure that it sounds professional. Also the structure of each individual paragraph could be more organized.

2.

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I noticed I need to go through and make sure that all of my paragraphs and statements are actually necessary to my argument.

3.

I need to work on having a stronger thesis and conclusion. I know that they are there but they aren't as prominent as they should be.

-Kristen Skuba