Rubric Criteria

Things I need to improve on:

1. I need to narrow down my thesis and topic development. I talk about a wide variety of topics, so I will narrow it down to around three specific parts of organic food.
2. I need to add a counterargument. I originally thought my counter argument would be that organic food is expensive, however I am thinking about adding another counter argument.
3. My organization is not great. I need to add better transitions, as well as reorganize my thesis and topic development points.